育才学习网1. 英语作文：Iwanttobe.要求讲述你的梦想,以及你为什么有那样的梦想
"I'm going to move somewhere interesting.Paris sounds like a city that I could enjoy."你没写出为什么有那样的梦想——"because i want to move somewhere interesting.For example,Paris.I can interview somebody who is famous in Paris and take some beautiful photos there ""There are lots of things to do.So how am I going to do it "这个句子属于直译，不对——"To be a reporter,we should do lots of things first .We should study hard and do something to improve our experience ."你只写你攒钱，没写怎么提高水平"First ,I'm going to find a part-time job for a year or two and save some money.secondly I'm going to write article and send them to magazines and newspapers."写得详略不当，语法也有点错误，——"First ,I'm going to find a part-time job for a year or two to save some money.Second I'm going to write articles and send them to magazines or newspapers."结尾不好"If I do it hard ,I will be a reporter in the future ."总的来说就是基本上符合提议，但不够深入，如果这篇作文15分只能得7分。