育才学习网1. 英语段落的写法
好模糊。
对你的问题2中理解。先简单的说：1.左对齐I do not understand why people confuse my Siamese cat, Prissy, with the one I had several years ago, Henry. The two cats are only alike in breed. Prissy, a quiet, feminine feline, loves me dearly but not possessively. She likes to keep her distance from people, exert her independen2.左缩进2个字符（和中文的一样） I do not understand ehy people confuse cat, prissy, whith rhw one I had saveral years ago. Henry. the two cats are only alike in breed. Prissy, a quiet, feminine// 如果你的意思是如何写好一个段落，那么请继续往下看首先，一个段落必须有一个中心即主题思想，该中心由主题句特别是其中的题旨来表达。
整个段落必须紧扣这个主题（stick or hold to the topic），这就是段落的统一性（unity）。其次，一个段落必须有若干推展句，使主题思想得到充分展开，从而给读者一个完整的感觉，这就是完整性（completeness or adequateness）。
再者，一个段落不是杂乱无章的，而是有机的组合，句子的排列顺序必须合乎逻辑，从一个句子到另一个句子的过渡必须流畅（smooth），这就是连贯性（coherence）。下面我们就对这三个标准分别加以说明。
1、统一性 一个段落内的各个句子必须从属于一个中心，任何游离于中心思想之外的句子都是不可取的。请看下例： Joe and I decided to take the long trip we'd always wanted across the country. We were like young kids buying our camper and stocking it with all the necessities of life. Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie. We started out in early spring from Minneapolis and headed west across the northern part of the country. We both enjoyed those people we met at the trailer park. Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner. To our surprise, we found that we liked the warm southern regions very much, and so we decided to stay here in New Mexico. 本段的主题句是段首句，controlling idea（中心思想）是take the long trip across the country。
文中出现两个irrelevant sentences，一个是Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie，这一段是讲的是Joe and I ，中间出现一个Bella是不合适的。还有，Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner这一句更是与主题句不相关。
考生在四级统考的作文卷上常常因为造出irrelevant sentences（不相关语句）而丢分，值得引起注意。再看一个例子： My name is Roseanna, and I like to keep physically fit. I used to weigh two hundred pounds, but I joined the YMCA for an exercise class and diet program. In one year I lost eighty pounds. I feel much better and never want to have that much weight on my five-feet frame again. I bought two new suitcases last week. Everyday I practice jogging three miles, swimming fifteen laps, lifting twenty-pound weights and playing tennis for one hour. My mother was a premature baby. 本段的controlling idea 是like to deep physically fit，但段中有两个irrelevant sentences，一个是I bought two new suitcases last week，另一个是My mother was a premature baby。
从上面两个例子可以看出，native speakers同样会造出来irrelevant sentences。卷面上如果这种句子多了，造成偏题或离题，那问题就更严重了。
2、完整性 正象我们前面说得那样，一个段落的主题思想靠推展句来实现，如果只有主题句而没有推展句来进一步交待和充实，就不能构成一个完整的段落。同样，虽然有推展句，但主题思想没有得到相对圆满的交待，给读者一种意犹未尽的感觉。
这样的段落也不能完成其交际功能。例如： Physical work can be a useful form of therapy for a mind in turmoil. Work concentrates your thoughts on a concrete task. Besides, it is more useful to work ---- you produce something rather than more anxiety or depression. 本段的主题句是段首句。
本段的两个推展句均不能回答主题句中提出的问题。什么是“a mind in turmoil”（心境不平静）Physical work又如何能改变这种情况？为什么它能起therapy的作用？读者得不到明确的答案。
由于四级统考的作文部分只要求写一篇100~120个词的三段式短文，每一段只有大约40个词左右，因此，要达到完整就必须尽可能地简明。例如： It is not always true that a good picture is worth a thousand words. Often writing is much clearer than a picture. It is sometimes difficult to figure out what a picture means, but a careful writer can almost always explain it. 段首句所表达的主题思想是一种看法，必须有具体事例加以验证。
上述两个推展句只是在文字上对主题作些解释，整个段落内容空洞，简而不明。如果用一两个具体的例子的话，就可以把主题解释清楚了。
比如下段： It is not always true that a picture is worth a thousand words. Sometimes, pictures are pretty useless things. If you can't swim and fall in the river and start gulping water, will you be better off to hold up a picture of yourself drowning, or start screaming "Help"? 3、连贯性（。
2. 用英语写
Love
Love is an art which involves deep emotion. It is a pure and lofty desire in one's innermost heart. Real love means not only a pleasure, but also loyalty and obligation. To love is to give and sacrillce. One who can not create happiness, even make sacrifice for his beloved, cannot be counted as a true lover.
To be loved you have to love. True lovers are willing to sacrifice themselves for each other's sake. True love needs no expression in words. One glance is enough to make each other understand. A handshake, a gentle touch inspired by respect and admiration, will leave you intoxicated and remain in your memory. Even when you are old you will recall and cherish it with deep emotion.
Real love is unforgetahle. With the development of science and technology, love becomes more noble, rich, fine and subtle. As is known to all, everyone is born with the right to love and also the right to refuse to return love. Human love exists with human beings. Wherever there are people, there is love.
Let us draw courage, confidence and happiness from love.
爱
爱是涉及感情深处的艺术。它是人内心深处纯洁而崇高的欲望。真正的爱不仅意味着愉快，而且意味着忠诚和义务。爱是付出和牺牲。一个不能为所爱的人创造幸福甚至做出牺牲的人，不能算作一个真正的爱人。
要得到爱就必须付出爱。真正相爱的人愿为彼此做出牺牲。真正的爱不需要任何的语言来表达，一个眼神就足以使彼此互相了解。怀着尊重和敬意的握手、轻触就会令人陶醉，永记心头，甚至到老也会满怀深情地珍惜回忆。
真正的爱是不会忘记的。随着科技的发展，爱情变得更崇高、更丰富、更美好和更细腻。众所周知，人人生来就有权爱他人，也有权拒绝他人的爱。自从有人类就有爱，只要是有人的地方就有爱。
让我们从爱中获取勇气、信心和幸福。
3. 翻译一段英语
勉强能认（还好是小学英语）
原文打错了很多，应当如下
my weekend
I usually have a busy weekend. I visit my grandmother erery Saturday morning. In the afternoon,I often do my homework. Sometimes, I watch TV in the evening. (On) Sunday morning, I always play football with my Friends. In the Sunday afternoon, I wash my clothes and clean my room. I always have good times erery weekend!
（这文章写的实在不怎么样）
翻译如下
我的周末
我的周末经常过得很忙碌。我在每个周六早晨拜访我的祖母。在下午，我经常做作业。有时，我在傍晚看电视。在周日早晨，我总是和朋友们一起踢足球。在周日下午，我会去洗衣服，并整理房间。我在周末总能过得很愉快！
4. 英语作文第二段怎么写
② 观点不能过于宽泛 E.g. 3 --- Making friends online is helpful. 观点过于宽泛可改为 ---
Making friends online is helpful in broadening our friend circle. ② 观点不能重复
E.g. 4 The Importance of Keeping a Good Mood --- The first reason is that we
need to keep a good mood. 观点过于重复可将其具体化为 ---Firstly we need to keep a good mood to build harmonious interpersonal relationship. ---We need to keep a good mood
first to keep us healthy both physically and mentally.
Exercises 1. Cellphone is very important to our life. means of communication/ entertainment
way of getting information 2. Women's role is more difficult to play than that
of men. constant physical troubles social troubles ③ 分主题要有足够的概括性 非论证过程或详细的描写
E.g. 5 ---Firstly the most popular function of a cellphone is that we can send
SMS to fulfill an instant contact with others. 观点为具体细节非命题形式的论点可改为 --- Firstly
communication is the most popular function of a cellphone. We can send SMS to
fulfill an instant contact with others anywhere and at ay time. E.g. 6 --- First a 100-year-old man was reported to do physical exercise every day. He said that it is sports that make him stay healthy. 分论题为具体描述非命题形式的论点应作为论据论点可为 --- Physical exercise helps to keep ourselves healthy.
5. 用英语写段话描述认们是怎样学习英语的
以下是我从 fortable they will become. Watch English Films and Television This is not only a fun way to learn but it is also very effective. By watching English films (especially those with English subtitles) you can expand your vocabulary and hear the flow of speech from the actors. If you listen to the news you can also hear different accents. Listen to English Music Music can be a very effective method of learning English. In fact, it is often used as a way of improving comprehension. The best way to learn though, is to get the lyrics (words) to the songs you are listening to and try to read them as the artist sings. There are several good internet sites where one can find the words for most songs. This way you can practice your listening and reading at the same time. And if you like to sing, fine. Study As Often As Possible! Only by studying things like grammar and vocabulary and doing exercises, can you really improve your knowledge of any language. Do Exercises and Take Tests Many people think that exercises and tests aren't much fun. However, by completing exercises and taking tests you can really improve your English. One of the best reasons for doing lots of exercises and tests is that they give you a benchmark to compare your future results with. Often, it is by comparing your score on a test you took yesterday with one you took a month or six months ago that you realize just how much you have learned. If you never test yourself, you will never know how much you are progressing. Start now by doing some of the many exercises and tests on this site, and return in a few days to see what you've learned. Keep doing this and you really will make some progress with English. Record Yourself Nobody likes to hear their own voice on tape but like tests, it is good to compare your tapes from time to time. You may be so impressed with the progress you are making that you may not mind the sound of your voice as much. Listen to English By this, we mean, speak on the phone or listen to radio broadcasts, audiobooks or CDs in English. This is different than watching the television or films because you can't see the person that is speaking to you. Many learners of English say that speaking on the phone is one of the most difficult things that they do and the only way to improve is to practice.。
6. 写一段英语作文
纯手工翻译！
My good friend Lucy comes from the USA. She is teaching English at Seaside University. Her students enjoy her classes a lot because her classes are very lively and interesting. Besides, she is also the coach of the class basketball team. She often plays basketball with students. Sometimes I treat her at my home. She likes Chinese food a lot, of which she loves eating dumplings best. I have much in common with her. We talk with each other in English and Chinese a lot. I believe that we can be good friends although there are so many differences between our cultures and languages.
7. 用英语怎样写一段对学校的第一印象
Into the school, the school gave me the first impression is that the United States: Ana Willow scene in the United States; clean and beautiful playground that the United States; that many of the building with respect, the United States; that trail winding streets, the United States .
- The United States, the United States and a good school!
See here, in the hearts can not help but think: all secondary schools are so good, much better than the primary. This opportunity, on being represented on the study - "to learn every day!" In such a good campus, learn good , Who is a pity. In the future, and I must make good on the big stage performance!
- The United States, the United States and a good school!
See here, in the hearts can not help but think: all secondary schools are so good, much better than the primary. This opportunity, on being represented on the study - "to learn every day!" In such a good campus, learn good , Who is a pity. In the future, and I must make good on the big stage performance!
